魔兽电影小说笔记(3)

katze11:

默念一遍他是真爱233333


#每日一捅#

I am the Guardian.
我是守护者。

21分43秒,麦迪文对他的国王说出这句话时是笑着的,侧颜,清浅,但不会认错的笑容。

已经没有颜文字能表达我的心痛了.jpg


(顺说,我的输入法真搞不好了,jpg->就怕狗是什么鬼啦!!!ヽ(≧□≦)ノ)


He will be coming with us,” Medivh spoke before Lothar could.
Lothar rolled his eyes. “Well, then. We’d better get going.”
“让他跟着我们。”不等洛萨开口,麦迪文已经说道。  
洛萨转转眼睛,“嗯,那么,我们最好现在就出发。”

中文版是转转眼睛,但结合电影里洛萨的动作,我觉得是翻了个白眼2333333
给洛萨配个内心OS:Mages,随你们凑成堆好了!!  o( ̄ヘ ̄o#)

two horses with good temperaments for Khadgar and Medivh
并为卡德加和麦迪文挑选了两匹性情驯顺的马

所以法师是不常骑马的?要好好保护这些脆皮们不能让他们被马颠到或踢到...不然以后大家就只有羊咩咩可以骑了2333333

不过电影里麦迪文一手执杖一手执绳,姿势摆得不要太端正太有腔调,我想他从前和另两只一起征战历险时一定没少骑马才对~~

Gryphons were fine, but horses were better.
狮鹫很好,但还是战马更棒。

这话说的,当心狮鹫姑娘啄你哦~~~洛萨你真是个脚踏实地的标准战士:)

they passed a towering statue with a very familiar face. Khadgar did a priceless double take, peering at the statue, then at Medivh, then at the statue again, and finally judiciously keeping his eyes straight forward.
卡德加觉得雕像的面孔非常眼熟,迟疑片刻之后,他又看了看那尊雕像,然后看看麦迪文,再将视线转回到雕像上,最后,他明智地让双眼直视前方。

哈哈哈哈哈这一段的画面感太鲜明~~卡德加脸上一整排黑体加粗的???却又不敢问出口地死死憋着哈哈哈哈哈

Medivh’s saddle creaked as he shifted. “I didn’t ask them to put that up.”
麦迪文的马鞍随着他移动重心而发出“吱嘎”的响声。“我没有要他们弄这个东西出来。”

麦同学你的感觉真敏锐23333 所以在马鞍上扭动了一下是因为有点小尴尬吗哈哈哈哈

“You saved the city,” Khadgar replied politely.
The Guardian frowned slightly. “You think it’s vain?”
“The people love you,” Khadgar stated. Lothar fought back a smile.
“But that’s not what I asked you.”
Khadgar squinted up at the blue sky. “When the sun is hot, it makes excellent shade.”
Medivh shot his old friend an impressed glance and, seemingly despite himself, couldn’t hide a smile.
“您拯救了城市。”卡德加礼貌地回应道。  
守护者微微一皱眉。“你认为这只是我的虚荣吗?”  
“人民爱戴您。”卡德加一本正经地说道。洛萨努力压抑住自己的笑意。  
“但这真的不是我要求他们弄的。”  
卡德加眯起眼睛看了看碧蓝的天空。“阳光炽热的时候,它能够投下好大一片阴凉。”  
麦迪文瞪了自己的老朋友一眼,却也掩饰不住自己的微笑。  

But that’s not what I asked you. 这里中文版的翻成“但这真的不是我要求他们弄的”,应该是“但这不是我问你的问题”吧,麦迪文在追问卡德加是不是觉得这个雕像只是个虚荣无益的面子工程,而我们的小朋友立即机智多端地回答了它的物理作用哈哈哈哈哈

an impressed glance 感觉这里也不是瞪了一眼,而是麦迪文对卡德加的应对挺满意,于是瞥了眼洛萨,像是在问“你到底从哪个犄角旮旯找来了这么个逗比小鬼“XDDDDDDD

好可惜这段电影里木有,否则搭配一下三人骑马并行,洛萨的低头窃笑,卡德加一副正直脸望天,麦迪文藏不住的嘴角微笑,想想就很美好呀!

Lothar took care to make eye contact and return some of the children’s salutes.Part of this battle, he knew already, would be won by keeping rumors to a minimum and the populace feeling safe
洛萨认真地与围观的人们逐一对视,并向一些敬礼的孩子还礼。他早就知道,赢得这场战争的要素之一就是尽量缩小谣言传播的范围,让人民感到安全

再感慨一次,从很多细节方面都能感觉到,安度因.洛萨的确是名伟大的战士,可敬的英雄。

He frowned. The forest was silent. Medivh, who rode a little ways ahead of him, had brought his horse down to a trot, then a halt. Lothar lifted his fist and the rest of the company clattered to a stop behind him. He kneed Reliant forward to the edge of the clearing beside Medivh.
洛萨皱起眉头。这片森林一片寂静。麦迪文正骑马跑在他前方不远处。守护者加快了坐骑的速度,又突然勒住马缰。洛萨举起拳头,让队伍停下来,同时用膝盖一顶信心,催马来到麦迪文身边。

我从这一段中感受到了两位老友早年一同历险的默契!

The Guardian was staring at a burned tree trunk that gave off a sickly green smoke. Glowing embers in the blackened wood winked like emeralds.
“It can’t be,” Lothar thought he heard Medivh murmur.
守护者的眼睛紧紧盯着一根不断冒出恶心的绿色烟雾的树干。那根焦黑的树干中还有一些炭火在闪光,就像是闪烁的绿色宝石。  
“这不可能!”洛萨觉得他听到了麦迪文的嘟囔。

啊啊啊啊啊啊啊纯粹花痴下电影里这段,23分左右开始,兜帽之下抬眸那一刻几乎可以定格的惊艳啊啊啊啊ヽ(✿゚▽゚)ノヽ(✿゚▽゚)ノヽ(✿゚▽゚)ノ

Khadgar dragged his horrified gaze from the carnage to see what Medivh was doing, thinking he could help. His bowels clenched even tighter when he realized that what the Guardian of Azeroth was doing was absolutely nothing. Medivh simply stood, staring.
卡德加将恐惧的目光从这片屠场上拽开,想要看看麦迪文在做什么。他相信守护者一定能援救这些骑士。但他的心被攥得更紧了——艾泽拉斯的守护者什么都没有做,只是站在一旁,注视着这一切。 

麦迪文在想什么呢?被横亘在眼前的鲜血和死亡迷惑了心神?在感受兽人身上熟悉的邪能气息?
(电影里麦同学此时全程面壁,呃,面树ing....)

Khadgar shook himself and, speaking quickly and clearly, cast a protective circle about himself and Medivh. The air shimmered, encasing them in a small, shimmering blue bubble. If the Guardian wasn’t ready to attack, at least the former Novitiate would see to it that those things didn’t slice them both in half.
卡德加摇摇头,让自己清醒过来,迅速而清晰地念诵出一段咒文,在他自己和麦迪文身周释放出一圈保护性的力场。空气在闪烁,将他们包裹在一个放射出微光的蓝色小球中。如果守护者没有准备好攻击敌人,至少这位曾经的学徒能够保护他们不被怪物砍成两段。

曾经的学徒,恩,这种表述有点让人误解卡德加曾经是麦迪文的学徒,但电影里两人之前没有交集吧,翻成曾经的见习守护者可能更准确些~

然后,啊啊啊啊啊卡德加是个好孩子,就算看到麦迪文诡异地啥都没干,还是手脚利落地保护住他,wasn’t ready to attack(而不是didn't want to attack),连借口都主动帮麦迪文寻好了(倒

“Guardian!” Khadgar shouted, his voice climbing.
The cry seemed to knock Medivh out of whatever trance he was in. He began to chant, light following the motions of his weaving fingers like ink from a pen until a sigil hung in the air.
“守护者!”卡德加喊道。他的声音越来越高亢。  
喊声似乎让麦迪文脱离了恍惚状态。他开始吟诵咒语,光芒从他轻盈摆动的指尖流出,就像是墨水从笔尖流出,在空气中绘制出一个徽记。  

不管是电影里还是小说里,影像或文字,麦迪文的施法过程都美如画!!!

Jagged, spindly fingers of green lightning leaped from the stricken creatures, arcing directly back to Medivh, who stood with his hands outstretched, palms up.
如同纤细手指的锯齿形绿色闪电从他们的体内跃出,划出一道道弧线落到麦迪文张开的双手,摊开的掌心上。

看电影时我还以为当时的麦迪文是在操纵这些兽人体内的邪能,现在看来不仅仅是操纵,而是回收利用啊啊啊啊啊啊 麦大师我隆重为您介绍下我大天朝历史悠久口碑出众不损容貌不毁衣物不让你变绿的北冥神功!吸星大法!_(xз」∠)_

我在想,元素魔法也好,奥术也好,肯定有其他的正常法术可以施展来遏制这些兽人,然而麦迪文却仍然选择了最容易暴露的一种,这是邪能控制下的本能反应吗?电影里麦迪文做完这一切后突然扭头去看卡德加,就好象不相信自己刚才的行为,或是惊惧于卡德加看到了这一切。

Behind Khadgar, Medivh gave a low, soft moan. Khadgar turned to see the Guardian of Azeroth down on one knee, pale and exhausted, the heels of his hands pressing into his temples.
“Guardian!” Khadgar stammered. He started to move toward Medivh, but the other waved him off as he got unsteadily to his feet. “What—did you do?”
Medivh ignored him utterly, focusing his attention on swiftly drawing another circle in the dirt. Frustrated, Khadgar persisted.
“The fel. I was right, wasn’t I? It’s here.”

在卡德加身后,麦迪文发出一阵微弱的呻吟。卡德加转回身,看到艾泽拉斯的守护者单膝跪倒在地,面色惨白,用掌根按在额角上,显得精疲力竭。  
“守护者!”卡德加有些口吃地喊道。他向麦迪文走去,但麦迪文已经摇摇晃晃地站起身,挥手示意他不必过来。卡德加不由得问道:“您……做了什么?”  
麦迪文完全没有理睬他,只是集中注意力,迅速在地面上画了一个圈。卡德加有些沮丧,但还是继续问道:  
“是邪能,我的判断是正确的,是吗?邪能就在这里。”

按额角那里,如果是用手指的话,我觉得可以介绍隔壁的X教授给麦迪文认识下∠( ᐛ 」∠)_
卡德加小结巴(笑)真是孜孜不倦向麦迪文求着认同感~~

然而被询问的对象已经都站不稳也累得快说不出话了T.T

Now, Medivh did look at him, his green-blue eyes piercing, it seemed, straight into Khadgar’s soul. “Get these soldiers safely back to Stormwind.” He stepped into the circle. “I must return to Karazhan.” He paused. “You did well today.”
麦迪文终于将目光转向他。那双蓝绿色的眼睛仿佛要刺穿卡德加的肉体,刺进他的灵魂。“带这些士兵平安返回暴风城。”他走进圆环中,“我必须回卡拉赞一趟。”说到这里,他又停顿了一下,“你今天做得很好。”  

我很想暗搓搓问一句...刺穿肉体这段加译是怎么搞出来的(|||゚д゚)

这个时候的麦迪文对卡德加已经足以信任到让后者带士兵安全返回的地步了吗?后面那句夸奖啊~~我总有种pat the puppy 的感觉(抽

【这里要插个花,电影20分12秒,麦迪文解释完什么是邪能后,是对着卡德加说了那句 You’ve done the right thing,而不是小说中文版里翻译的那样对着洛萨说,所以这里是第二次夸小孩子啦~~ 而且电影里卡德加听到这句话后嘴角还扬了下...被表扬了嘿略开心(。・∀・)ノ゛】

“Where’s he gone?” Lothar’s shout was both worried and angry as he cantered up to Khadgar
他去哪里了?”洛萨的喊声充满了忧虑和愤怒。他已经跑到卡德加的身边。

突如其来的惨剧,战友在他面前无助死亡,儿子差点没命,就连他自己都鬼门关走了一趟,而理应保护他们的强大的守护者,他信赖有加的多年挚友,却突然失去踪影,也难怪洛萨既worried又angry了...



They took my horse!”
“Really?” Lothar’s look of contempt could have withered an entire forest. “Just… stay there.” Lothar galloped off with a pair of knights. Khadgar fought back the urge to knock him off with a spell
他们抢了我的马!”  
“真的?”洛萨轻蔑的眼神几乎能让一整片森林枯萎,“那……就留在这里。”暴风城将军率领两名骑士纵马冲进森林。卡德加努力控制住自己,总算没有用法术把他从马背上敲下来

虽然这里其实气氛蛮严肃,但还是忍不住和在电影院里一样笑出来,wither an entire forest,感觉洛萨的情绪表达真的很直接,而卡德加的反应也是小孩子脾气杠杠的~

“You got a prisoner,” Khadgar said.
“So did you,” Lothar replied. “You took it alone?”
“Yes.”
For a moment, Lothar looked impressed, but then the expression was gone. He eyed the captive. “Looks like the runt of the litter.”
Khadgar sighed.
“你抓住了一个。”卡德加说。  
“你也是。”洛萨回应道,“你一个人抓住的?”  
“是的。”  
片刻之间,洛萨显得很有些震惊,但惊讶的表情很快就从他的脸上消失了。他看着这名俘虏,“看上去只是个小家伙。”  
卡德加叹了口气。          

最后那口气叹得,哈哈哈哈哈哈,不要总是欺负人家小朋友啊喂23333

The human turned toward her, alert as a predator. His eyes were… blue, his hair and beard pale, more like sand than earth.

Garona stared at her savior, impressed. Somehow, he had been both swift and strong enough to leap from his mount and strike the Frostwolf through the bars in time. Now, he looked at her again with those uncanny blue eyes.
“You’re welcome,” he said.
那个人类立刻将目光转向她,如同掠食的猛兽一般警觉。他的眼睛是……蓝色的,他的头发和胡须的颜色都很浅,颜色更像是沙子,而不是泥土。
迦罗娜盯着她的救星,心中感到一阵惊讶。这个人类有足够的速度和力量从坐骑上跳过来,及时地隔着囚笼击中目标。现在,他再次用那双怪异的蓝眼睛看着迦罗娜。  
“不用谢。”他说道

战斗状态下的洛萨真是帅呆了!!然而沙色的发须是个什么鬼~~

Lady Taria stood in the throne room, off to the side with Lothar, Khadgar, Callan, and some of her husband’s guards. She couldn’t keep from staring at the female prisoner Lothar and Khadgar had brought in. She looked so human… except that she didn’t. She was of human size and shape, and would have been pretty save for the small tusks jutting out of her lower jaw.
塔瑞亚王后也站在王座大厅中,旁边还有洛萨、卡德加和凯兰,以及她丈夫的卫兵。她的目光无法离开这名被洛萨和卡德加带进来的女性战俘。看上去,这个女孩是这么像人类……只是她并非人类。她有着和人一样的身高和体型,如果不是下颚上的那两颗小獠牙,她一定是一个非常漂亮的女孩。  

With him was the lone female who had been present during her interrogation earlier. She was so thin and fragile, like a woman made of twigs. Her eyes were large and brown and soft, like a talbuk’s.
和他一起来的还有上一次审问中唯一的女性。她是如此纤瘦娇柔,就像树梢的嫩枝。她有一双深褐色的大眼睛,非常温柔,很像是塔布羊的眼睛。


“You are a chieftain’s wife, then?”
The dark, delicate brows rose at the wording. “I suppose so.”
Garona stepped closer, towering over her. “Then killing you would bring me even greater honor.” Garona watched the female’s reaction. She was so frail-seeming, Garona wondered if the words would frighten her. They were certainly true.
But the female simply shook her head.
The girl smelled of fear, but not the cheiftain’s wife.
女人挑动了一下她秀美的深褐色眼眉。“我想是的。”  
迦罗娜向她靠近一步,低头俯视着她。“那么杀死你就会给我带来更大的荣耀。”她在注意这个女人的反应。看上去,这个女人是如此脆弱,迦罗娜想知道自己的话会不会吓到她。这句话可是千真万确的。  
但那个女人只是摇摇头。 
那个人类女孩的身上有恐惧的气味,但酋长的妻子身上没有。

The female extended an uncallused hand, reaching to touch Garona’s throat, saying, “I can have it removed—”
The orc jerked back, spilling the tea, instantly alert. The cheiftain’s mate drew her hand back, and her face was unspeakably kind. “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to startle you.” She took a deep breath. “There’s a life with us here, Garona. If you want it.”
Only once before had anyone even attempted to touch her with kindness. Another female—Draka, the mate of Durotan. Draka had worn a similar look to Taria’s—compassion, and anger at what Garona had been forced to endure.
女人伸出一只没有半点老茧的手,想要抚摸迦罗娜的喉咙,同时说道:“我可以让人拿掉它……”  
兽人女孩急忙后退,杯中的茶水泼溅出来。这是出于她直觉的警惕。酋长的妻子将手抽回去,脸上显露出无以形容的温柔。“很抱歉,我不是要吓你。”她深吸一口气,“迦罗娜,如果你愿意,可以和我们一起生活。”  
以前只有一个人对迦罗娜表露过温柔。那是另一个女人——德拉卡,杜隆坦的妻子。德拉卡和这个被称作塔瑞亚的女人有着很相似的眼神——同情,又为迦罗娜不得不承受的苦难感到愤怒。  

摘录这么几大段的缘故是...我觉得这两位女士的气场还蛮和的/////嗅到了一股百合的气息_(´ཀ`」 ∠)_   请告诉我这脑冻不是我一个人在开...(~▽~)~

When her husband’s father was killed and Llane took the throne, he had vowed to learn all he could about not only the kingdom he was to rule, but the world in which it was located. Standing before him was something utterly new. He was excited and fascinated by that and Taria knew it pained him to permit the use of violence against beings so, in his view, marvelous and remarkable.
当莱恩的父亲遇刺,莱恩登上王座的时候,他就发誓要学习一切知识,不仅是治国之术,还有关于这个世界的方方面面。现在,他面前出现了一种全新的智慧生物,这让他感到兴奋和痴迷。塔瑞亚明白,让莱恩下令对他眼里这个神奇和特殊的生灵使用暴力会让他感到痛苦。

这段很有趣,揭露出莱恩性格中求识若渴的那一面。认真讲,莱恩这个角色真的是很完美,作为国王他尽职尽责,爱护子民;身为父亲和丈夫,他对家人的呵护与珍惜在离别那一刻表露无遗;在战场上,他勇往直前,身先士卒;面对挚友,他给予他们无条件的信赖,至死无悔。这可是七国统帅啊筒子们,要帅气有帅气,要头脑有头脑,要胆量有胆量,既有对战到底的果敢与魄力,又有追寻和平的理智和仁心。简直是个十全人!

然而,俗话说,好人不长命....... (〒︿〒)

“How did you get here?”
The voice cut through the air of the room like a knife.
“你是怎样到达这里的?”  
这个声音如同匕首一般切穿了大厅中的空气。

讲真,麦迪文的每次出场都自带特效拉风无比~~(〃∀〃) 

How long has he been here, listening? Taria wondered.
他在这里已经有多久了?他一直在听我们的对话?塔瑞亚心中思忖。   

不免想到卡德加同学也很擅长偷听...所以这算是肯瑞托问题儿童们一脉相承的通病嘛哈哈哈哈哈

“Only I can control the fel!” he shrieked.
“只有我能控制邪能!”术士尖叫着跳起身。

.....论古尔丹、麦迪文、萨格拉斯和邪能之间的旷世悲情四角恋_(:3 」∠)_

But he would be a fool to blindly trust this Garona, and King Llane Wrynn did not tolerate fools
但如果让洛萨盲目相信迦罗娜,那洛萨就是个傻瓜。莱恩国王不会容忍傻瓜待在自己身边。   

洛萨是个典型的贵族骑士,对国王的忠诚以及对荣誉的注重几乎就是流淌在他血管里的本能。

Medivh was there, waiting for him. “I won’t be going with you,” the Guardian said.
Lothar ground his teeth. What had happened to Medivh in the last six years? He, the Guardian, and the King had been friends—more than friends, brothers in all but blood. They had fought together, suffered together. Been there for him when he had lost—
麦迪文正在那里等他。“我不会跟你去的。”守护者说。   
洛萨咬了咬牙。麦迪文在这六年里到底经历了些什么?他,守护者和国王曾经是最要好的朋友——不只是朋友,他们根本就是没有血缘关系的兄弟。他们曾并肩作战,一同承受各种磨难。当他需要帮助的时候,麦迪文从不会缺席…… 

曾经同甘苦共患难的brothers in all but blood啊~~ T﹏T
以及最后一句合上了我的某一个脑冻,恩,等我舔舔早已风干的烂笔头看能不能付诸于文字>v<

“Well I need to see what we’re up against. You don’t think seeing the enemy force firsthand is useful?” He couldn’t quite shove back the anger, and the concern that fueled it.
Medivh didn’t meet his gaze. “I have things to attend to.”
Lothar gave up on subtlety. He marched up to his old friend and looked at him searchingly. “What happened to you today?” It was both true query and an accusation.
“I was studying our foe—firsthand,” the Guardian replied slowly and deliberately.
Lothar snorted angrily. “If the kid hadn’t been with you, you’d have been studying the edge of an axe.”
Medivh shrugged laconically. “He had it in hand.” An idea seemed to occur to him. “You should take him with you. He’s more powerful than you think.”
“Medivh—” Lothar began, but there was a flurry of motion and he found himself talking to a raven. The bird flicked its tail and took wing, soaring out of the window.
“I hate it when he does that,” Lothar muttered.

“听着,我要去看看我们到底遇上了怎样的敌人。你不认为亲眼看见敌人的军队会是非常有用的第一手资料吗?”洛萨没办法压抑住心中的怒火,而深深的担忧只是让他的怒意更加强烈。   
麦迪文没有看他的眼睛。“我还有事情要做。”   
洛萨没有再争辩。他大步走到老友面前,仔细端详麦迪文。“你今天怎么了?”他在询问,也是在责备。   
“我正在研究我们的敌人——用的是第一手的资料。”守护者缓慢而别有深意地回答道。   
洛萨愤怒地哼了一声:“如果那个孩子不在你身边,你就只能去研究斧子了。”   
麦迪文只是耸了耸肩。“那孩子应对得很好。”然后他似乎又想到了什么,“你应该带上那孩子,他比你想象得更有能力。”   
“麦迪文……”洛萨继续说道,但在一阵空气的乱流之后,他发现自己只是在和一只乌鸦说话。那只鸟抖动了一下尾巴,就展翅飞出了窗口。   
“我讨厌他这样做。”洛萨嘟囔着。 

这一整段电影里都没有体现出来,觉得也蛮遗憾的,因为针对洛萨性格的刻画,他对老友异常的种种疑虑,还有麦迪文此刻的彷徨犹疑或者说心虚,都表现得很清楚了。

洛萨就是那种心头一把火的硬汉做派,越担心,越挂念,随之喷出来的火星子就越多XD
而麦迪文,诶,一边回避对方的视线,一边言语不详,这心(体)里(内)有(藏)鬼(魔)得不能再明显了!还用了firsthand这个词...汗毛都要竖起来了好嘛。

然而变乌鸦飞走那里还是让我笑出来了,依照洛萨这么大了都还怨念如此的程度,他小时候被麦同学用法术戏耍的次数说起来大概都是泪啊泪233333



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